From Script to Screen - Faigel Concepts (feedback/suggestions wanted)

I decided to start designing my main character as a basis for other characters in my world. She'll be the kind of "base" i'll form their designs from, to make it be believable for the characters to interact.

Any kind of feedback and suggestions for her concepts would be great. (such as suggesting things for me to try or look at, or even something simple as stating which drawing you like)