Hey Annie - just checking in to make sure you consider that your Art Of needs to be a completely self-contained reading experience - i.e. you need to create a preface that summarises why the Art Of even exists - i.e. - what's the brief? What's the scenario? Who is the audience and so on... You need to imagine that someone 'not you' and 'not me' is going to look at this publication and not be confused in any way as to why it exists. You need to think about your exposition - find a way to encapsulate the project accordingly for the new-comer. It's looking strong and confident visually, but right now there's a sense you're making it for yourself... for example, your script could be in there right, presented engagingly? Try and make it the a to z of your project :)
I'll take the time to edit the title pages so they have that information. I'll put in the preface too maybe toward the end so I can make a contents page at the same time. :)
Hey Annie - just checking in to make sure you consider that your Art Of needs to be a completely self-contained reading experience - i.e. you need to create a preface that summarises why the Art Of even exists - i.e. - what's the brief? What's the scenario? Who is the audience and so on... You need to imagine that someone 'not you' and 'not me' is going to look at this publication and not be confused in any way as to why it exists. You need to think about your exposition - find a way to encapsulate the project accordingly for the new-comer. It's looking strong and confident visually, but right now there's a sense you're making it for yourself... for example, your script could be in there right, presented engagingly? Try and make it the a to z of your project :)
ReplyDeleteI'll take the time to edit the title pages so they have that information. I'll put in the preface too maybe toward the end so I can make a contents page at the same time. :)
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