As a response to my own notes, I decided to have a stab at writing a verse for this song.
"Shot with an arrow
I’m falling apart
And my face in the mirror
Does not match my heart
But I’m moving on
And I’m walking along"
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"Shot with a burning? arrow
I am burning to pieces/ashes?
My face in the smashed mirror
Is oh so far from decent?"
Admittedly I'm not the best at writing lyrics, but I had a stab at it and then drew some rough storyboards as a response to those.
I showed them to Kowa and she said they are something she can work with when going forward.
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